final draft to paper you completed on Genetic Trauma corrections

Comments from teacher on rough draft were as follows:
-interesting topic
–good lead-in and focus
–body paragraphs should be more of an overview of your research process and not a “conclusion” yet–consider separate paragraphs for different inquiry points–see student sample
–consider more sources for a more comprehensive inquiry research process
–no bold needed on works cited title


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